editing & polishing checklistCongratulations! You've finished your manuscript. Now it's time to dig into those rewrites and edit your way to a published book. A terrific resource is Self-Editing for Fiction Writers by Renni Browne and Dave King. But here is a basic checklist of questions to ask when you start your editing process. Customize it to your strengths and weaknesses. This checklist is included in the "My WIP Notebook", available in wire-bound notebook format or edoc file.
manuscript formatBe sure your manuscript is formatted to industry standards:
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Spelling |
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Grammar |
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Research |
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Read for Flow |
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Are your heroine's goals and motivations clear throughout? |
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Are your hero's goals and motivations clear throughout? |
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Are your villain's motivations clear for his/her actions? |
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Do you feel the sexual tension between them throughout the novel? |
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Are the characters' emotions believable? |
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Were you consistent in descriptions? |
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Have you shared more backstory than required to tell the story? Can any of it be cut? |
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Have you avoided overused plot devices or found a fresh way to tell them? |
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Does the plot complete itself, with a solid beginning, middle and end? |
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Do you have enough turning points, changes in the middle to move the pace? |
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Are all questions asked resolved in the end? |
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Show versus Tell |
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Passive Writing: |
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Sentence Structure: Is your sentence structure varied throughout? |
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Point Of View: |
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Dialogue: Read it out loud for flow. |
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Pace: |
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Scene: Does each scene move the story forward? |
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Balance: Consider taking a couple of highlighters and highlight separately sections of dialogue, internal narrative, action and description. Do you have a balance? Too much of one? Not enough? |